Is this poem for the people?

triumph

sometimes I wonder

how life can be so good

when you鈥檙e single and alone

with nobody to hold your hand

while you walk down empty hallways

thinking you have no meaning

or no sense of purpose at all.

while most of the men and women out there

are busy spreading their legs and pounding flesh

you sit at home and wonder why it鈥檚 not you

who seems so satisfied with being in love

but we鈥檙e all afraid of something

so you鈥檙e best to fear nothing at all

because the only love in life that you need

is piece of mind in being who you are.

which is not to say that you鈥檙e above them

because nothing is wrong with finding love

but one must not let longing control them

lest they wind up tired and remorseful

rather it is better to understand

that not everybody can be complete

you must accept your lonely misfortune

and enjoy your (disappointing) triumph.

Is this poem for the people?free spyware remover

I'm sure it is for the people since you probably didn't intend to just read it to your dog.It is avant garde stuff. That's a high compliment, coming from me. Most people will not care for the honesty in it. I respect how deep you had to reach for it. I do think you should change "piece of mind" to "peace of mind." Just a typo. No biggie.

Is this poem for the people?ktm

Seems like three pretty straightforward (and really long) sentences to me. Aside from the formatting, what makes this a poem and not a piece of prose?
As long as they are not 'very little people'...yes.

But remember these Absolutes:

Love is NOT equal to Pounding Flesh

Triumph is NOT disappointing in the end

and

Lonliness is NOT misfortune if we learn to look Above beyond the imperial 'us' (outside ourselves)