Do you like my poem?

my bf wrote me a poem i returned it with this

Sweet as sugar,

soft as the skies.

hanging above us,

cupid sighs.

One sweet arrow,

poisned with love.

now shot from his,

bow he waits above.

Sweet as sugar,

soft as the skies.

up above us,

cupid flys.

A twinkle of triumph,

glints in his eyes.

with his bow and his arrow,

into the skies.

is it good?

Do you like my poem?triumph

yeh its good alryt! i must say, i almost cried!! gee dat rhymes, i should write a poem too!

did you REALLY write this poem???

Do you like my poem?worms

awwww,sweet x
It's Hallmark Card Good.
I LOVE IT !!!

but you should have though of A title !!!

how did you come up with something that bright ?!

i bet your B/F is going to LOVE that cute lil' poem !
aww that is really cute and very good. i'm sure your bf will love it.
no its not

its great
two thumbs up!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww i'm in love with it it was wondeful it brung a twinkle to my eye.... that was sooooo sweet and your one lucky girl.... keep him as long as u can
yes. very good. its so sweet =)
ITS SO ADORABLE I 鈾T