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Forty meters from the sea

Stands an awkward man in black clothing

In his defeated hand

He grips a bouquet of prickly white roses

Tightly; the blood from his hand dirties his white cuff

The expression on his face is one of triumph

And yet his aura screams sorrowfully

If you walk up close enough to him

You can make out a piece of paper

A list of names unread; a checkbook of horrors

He does not speak, but merely drifts

Not walking, not moving

But he is not standing still

Could he be floating?

I am the only one who knows

Where he stands, he crushed a sandcastle

It was mine

He wanted me to weep, but

It was a structure of little importance to me

I was only four

I did not build it

I found it

So when it fell, I did not cry

When the sun went down, suddenly

There was a deafening boom

His roses grew thorns; he began to bleed as you see him now

I am looking to build again someday

But before I do, I wish to read his list

I need to know their names

And I am willing to wait

Until roses consume him

What do you think of this poem?adware

It's kind of scary yet interesting I think that is a wonderful poem I love it! You could make a living with poetry!

What do you think of this poem?antivirus scan

Wow! I really like that poem! It is kind of creepy though, but in a good way!
It's kinda scary. And Emo!