Tuesday, October 20, 2009

Here is a second short poem?

I wrote this last Christmas



MAJESTIC ELEPHANT



Oh majestic elephant you walk this earth with grace



With that prestigious look of pride and triumph resting on your face



May I have a ride?



Will you be my guide?



Oh majestic elephant I want to feel the pride



Here is a second short poem?network



I love it! Your poems are awesome! You have a knack for rhyming with ease, not just putting words together that happen to sound the same.



Here is a second short poem?norton



I like it its diffrent
I like it cept for the last line...I don't think it's a good place to end.

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