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ok for government class we were given to right a paragraph to this..."your opinion of the American Government"

and this was mines

Finally, Despite many of the bad Presidents. Our type of government over all has served, protected and most importantly kept us to what we are today 鈥淎merica鈥? The same America that stays till the end and bravely fights to what is best and believed; our liberty, our Justice and our prosperity. Yes we鈥檝e had flaws that could have been prevented and done better but in the end without those flaws we wouldn鈥檛 appreciate triumph and Honor ship of the great country that both the people and government has proudly allowed us to call through battle and glory, Our country鈥?,America.

so question is...what do you think of it?

thanks :)

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Dear Jaymee: These other people both said you have some writing issues and I agree, but I am going to help you write it better. This is how I would word it, without changing your meaning:

Finally, America has a government that serves and protects its citizens, despite having leadership that has sometimes been bad over the years. Bravery and fighting for the rights of freedom, justice and prosperity all remain at the core of this country's spirit. There have certainly been flaws and mistakes that could have been prevented; we could have done better at times. Without the flaws and occasional mistakes, we wouldn't appreciate the greatness of our country as much.