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Okay I'm writing a Main Thesis and the Statements for the short story "The Possibility of Evil"! Can anyone look at it and give me some tips?

INTRODUCTION+

MT :

A well known ancient Greek politician, Sophocles, once said, 鈥淎ll concerns of men go wrong when they wish to cure evil with evil.鈥?This is what Miss Strangeworth, the main character of 鈥淭he Possibility of Evil鈥? does. She writes crude letters to all of the townsfolk in a cruel attempt to stop evil from spreading around her town. Shirley Jackson, the author of this short story, believes that while attempting to triumph evil people may lose themselves and become evil as well.

ST#1:

In the beginning of the story, Miss Strangeworth is shown as a perfectionist; she likes everything in her town to be in order and rid of evil.

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Great plot

Even better story line. You could be the female Stephen King

What you may lack is the knack of making your narrative flow .

Best advice is to get any Stephen King book and study the way he draws the reader into the story.

It is not wrong to study and cppy the masters. Everyone started that way.

That's what creative writing classes tell you to do.

Much good luck. I think you will be famous one day.